Review: Untold by Sarah Rees Brennan (The Lynburn Legacy, book 2)

As Kami Glass and her friends continue to battle the sorcerers of the Lynburn family in the sleepy English town of Sorry-in-the-Vale, friendships and families are torn apart.

Rating:  ★★★★☆ – really liked it
Genre:  young adult fiction, ya mystery, paranormal fantasy
Pros:  queer rep, more banter!, funny
Cons:  love triangle (ish), occasionally choppy narrative

A lot of the things I would talk about in a review for Untold are things I already talked about in my review of the first book, Unspoken. To avoid being repetitive I will skip those and advise you to read that review, then move on to Untold-specific things:

Untold is one of the better sequels I’ve read in a while. It didn’t fall into the traps a lot of “middle of a trilogy” books fall into.

We get more insight into the personalities of several characters that we didn’t get in the first book. This is done through a ton of POV switching (Unspoken switched between Jared & Kami, Untold goes much farther than that). This can sometimes make the narrative feel a little choppy, but overall I think it’s good for the story.

Almost everyone got a little character development. Kami has to learn to cope with things on her own, Holly must learn to accept who she is, Jared learns to care about other people and let them in, just to list a few. Even the adults got some moments of development.

I’ve never read a book with such a strong ensemble of characters, and I’m not sure how I can go back to reading books where background characters are 2-dimensional plot devices now that I’ve found Sarah Rees Brennan’s novels.

I want to take a minute to talk about the queer representation in the novel, because something happened that you so rarely see. We already have the character whose sexuality we discovered in the first book, and that gets developed a bit. Turns out she knew and accepted that she was a lesbian, but wasn’t quite ready for other people to know. Then we get another character who is unsure of her own sexual identity because she knows she likes boys and now is shocked to discover an attraction to another girl. She discusses this with another character and this is where I braced myself for the inevitable “you can just like people, not labels” or some other such copout. But instead he openly discusses bisexuality with her. He even says the word “bisexual”! For some people this probably seems like a small thing to be so excited about, but being bisexual myself, and constantly seeing media refuse to acknowledge it even when they have bisexual characters, this scene was very important to me and utterly refreshing.

The plot feels a little slower paced than the first book, but I think this is mostly due to the fact that there is less suspense and mystery. Instead of finding bodies and trying to figure out who the bad guys are, the group are preparing for a showdown. There is still some mystery and there’s a big confrontation at the end like the first novel, but most of the book is about planning and preparing. Luckily, the book is well-written and there is enough going on the keep the reader interested despite the somewhat slower plot.

On the whole, Untold is an excellent bridge between the first novel and the third. The reader ends up just as invested in the main plot arc as in the first novel and more invested in the characters, which is exactly what a second book needs to do to move a trilogy along. It’s an easy read with enough substance not to be considered fluff.

In addition to those who enjoyed the first novel, Unspoken, I recommend Untold to fans of ya romance, paranormal fantasy, and novels with strong characterization.


Spoiler Zone

I mentioned in my review of Unspoken that there was something about the first book that left me angry and that I hoped would be resolved in the sequel. It was! If you are someone who found yourself angry at Jared’s character in the end of the first book and you aren’t sure if you want to read Untold because of that, this spoiler is for you!
[start] We learn that Jared lashed out at Kami because of what she said before she broke the link and his belief that she wanted nothing to do with him. Her avoiding him afterwards (because she believed what he said) confirmed for Jared that she must hate him so he tried to maintain a distance from her, partially because of his hurt feelings and partially because he believed it’s what she wanted. [end]

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Review: Unspoken by Sarah Rees Brennan (The Lynburn Legacy, book 1)

Sorry-in-the-Vale is full of things no one wants to talk about: the secretive Lynburn family, ritual killings, and a history of magic. But Kami Glass is no stranger to mysterious things. Since childhood she has had a boy in her head that no one believes is real. With the danger mounting, Kami is determined to unravel the mysteries of her little town.

Rating:  ★★★★☆ – really liked it
Genre:  young adult fiction, ya mystery, paranormal fantasy
Pros:  funny, unique premise, Banter!
Cons:  love triangle (ish), occasionally choppy narrative

Prior to Unspoken I had never heard of a young adult gothic novel. I wasn’t sure what to expect, but the unique premise drew me. I have to say, I’m glad I gave it a chance!

The absolute best part of the book is the banter between characters. I’m a sucker for quality banter. If you are too, then you’ll be hooked on Unspoken in just a few pages.

I really appreciated the female friendships in this book. Too often in YA female friends wind up in competition somehow, and at first I expected this book to go the same way. In fact, there was a point in the beginning where I expected this book to be just another Not-Like-Other-Girls-girl irrationally hates Popular-With-The-Boys-girl book, but instead we get some character growth instead and ended up with loyal, dedicated female friends.

It was also nice to see a family that mattered in a YA book. A lot of times, the protags family is mentioned, but barely and rarely. In Unspoken, we see that Kami has a loving family, still touched by the secrets of Sorry-in-the-Vale, and the family dynamic is mercifully believable.

I loved the connection between Kami and Jared, but I didn’t like the way it kept somehow being turned into some idea that they should be romantically involved. That never did make sense to me. And, as you may have guessed, I wasn’t at all interested in the love triangle the author kept trying to create. I mostly tuned out that aspect, if I’m being honest.

Kami is of mixed ancestry, with her paternal grandmother being Japanese, and it served the story well. Kami was seen by a lot of people as a partial-outsider, in the way that small towns full of mostly white people tend to see anyone whose entire family tree isn’t rooted right there in that very ground. And there were some bits of Japanese folklore thrown in as well. Not being Japanese myself, or well-versed in Japanese folklore, I can’t say if it was done accurately, but I do think it was good for the novel.

There was a bit at the end that I won’t say too much about, because of spoilers, but it seemed highly incongruous with previous characterization and I was as stunned as Kami over it. My shock quickly gave way to anger. However, because it happened at the very last moment, and because this is only the first book in the series, I have some hope it will be explained or justified in the second book.

The paranormal aspect wasn’t as scary as I would have expected based on the character’s reactions to it, but the rest of the mystery really was quite creepy. As the book went on I found myself in the same predicament as Kami, with a reason to suspect everyone, trusting no one. And yet, for all my suspicions I didn’t quite manage to predict that ending. (Note:  I don’t mean the part of the ending that I mentioned left me angry, that part is actually just one little moment, after the resolution of the mystery.)

I would recommend Unspoken to young adult fans of gothic novels or mysteries, and as previously mentioned, to anyone who is a total sucker for witty, funny banter between characters.


Spoiler Zone

One of the more disappointing things, for me, was a plot point, and mostly affects the story going forward, but due to it’s spoilery nature I’m going to hide it below:

[start] I really hate the loss of the connection between Kami and Jared. It was the most interesting part of the story and I don’t see how the next book will be quite as good without it… [end]

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Review: When the Moon Was Ours by Anna-Marie McLemore

As their deep friendship turns to love, Latina teenager Miel, who grows roses from her wrist, and Italian-Pakistani Samir, a transgender boy, fear their secrets will be exposed by the beautiful Bonner girls, four sisters rumored to be witches.

Rating:  ★★★★★ – it was amazing
Genre:  young adult fiction, ya fantasy, magical realism
Pros:  chock-full of representation, lyrical prose, beautiful imagery
Cons:  occasionally dense

When the Moon Was Ours is a lovely story that I officially recommend to everyone.

The writing is beautiful and flows like a song. Even when things are happening in the story that are hard, the writing is so lyrical you don’t entirely hate to read it.

I’ve never described my favorite thing about a book as “the colors” before, and in any other context it would make no sense at all. But the imagery used by McLemore paints such vibrant pictures in the mind! Reading this book left me with a swirl of colors in my imagination.

There were a few times where the prose got a bit dense and I would find myself needing to reread a passage to figure out exactly what was occurring or impatient to get past the descriptive language to the action again. Luckily, these instances were few and far between. Overall the book was a joy to read.

The absolute best part of the book was the representation. Reading a book with so much racial diversity and LGBT+ representation right at the forefront — not shoved into a passing remark or a single character — was like a breath of fresh air. And what’s more, it was all handled with loving sensitivity.

If you are one of the many readers challenging themselves to read more #OwnVoices novels, a fan of the Magical Realism genre, or just a lover of well-told stories, you absolutely must get your hands on a copy of When the Moon Was Ours. It is a unique and thoroughly enjoyable tale of magic and romance.

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