Comments on: First Lines Fridays: March 31, 2017/2017/03/31/flf-mar31-2017/Sat, 01 Apr 2017 22:02:25 +0000hourly1http://wordpress.com/By: Lee/2017/03/31/flf-mar31-2017/comment-page-1/#comment-67Sat, 01 Apr 2017 22:02:25 +0000/?p=3149#comment-67In reply to Krysta.

It has to be done really well to hook a reader, you’re totally right about that!

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]]>By: Krysta/2017/03/31/flf-mar31-2017/comment-page-1/#comment-66Sat, 01 Apr 2017 22:00:46 +0000/?p=3149#comment-66I admit those lines didn’t hook me. But I’m also not a fan of the first-person present in novels because it’s difficult to pull off effectively.

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